Monday, 13 June 2016

Prove it to Move It

Can I use carefully selected adjectives, nouns, verbs and adverbs?

One clear sunny summers day I went to a party at Wanganui  East pools. It was my cousin's birthday. First I went on the diving board, splash. I had slowly cannon balled in the pool a few times. Blonk, I dived into the crystal clear and cold pool and swam to my sister Ada and my cousin Avana who was  having the birthday. After it all I went home in my aunties blue car.

2 comments:

  1. Nice story Taika. It was cool that you had to underline the adjectives and verbs!

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  2. Well done Taika.You must know lots of adjectives and adverbs.

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