Can I use carefully selected adjectives, nouns, verbs and adverbs?
One clear sunny summers day I went to a party at Wanganui East pools. It was my cousin's birthday. First I went on the diving board, splash. I had slowly cannon balled in the pool a few times. Blonk, I dived into the crystal clear and cold pool and swam to my sister Ada and my cousin Avana who was having the birthday. After it all I went home in my aunties blue car.